Thread:TheBAT21/@comment-16533050-20170905222647

Please make sure that the edits you are doing serve a purpose to improve the overall page. Removing Simon from in front of Stagg serves no real purpose, neither does replacing 'he' with 'Stagg'.

Here for example, nothing you changed is needed or even restructures the phrasing.

If there is a grammatical or punctuation error, or the OVERALL readability of the page is changed, then that is not only acceptable, it is encouraged.

However, some of the changes you make are superficial at best and not even cosmetic fixes. I would ask that you refrain from continuing this trend. 